Night

The night is black without light No glare for your eyes to fight No blinding colors to behold Just darkest deeds of man grown old Nothing to see but infinity

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Jean Bush

Date: 11/8/2018 12:47:00 PM

Is there anything left for us but this dark future? Beautifully written.

Warren Doll
Date: 5/2/2019 9:27:00 AM

Hi Jean, hopefully there is. Thanks for your comment and visit. All the best~ Warren

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2018 8:52:00 PM

I love the mysteries of night if I am somewhere safe gazing at the stars. Sounds like a night during the new moon? Lovely! : )

Warren Doll
Date: 7/30/2018 8:51:00 AM

So glad that you liked it, Connie. Warmest wishes // Warren :)

Al Juman

Date: 7/21/2018 1:29:00 PM

our clock is tracking there nicely said my friend

Warren Doll
Date: 7/30/2018 8:47:00 AM

Thank You, Al

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/10/2018 9:37:00 AM

Chubby!

Warren Doll
Date: 7/11/2018 8:39:00 AM

Glad that you liked it, Mike.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/27/2018 7:53:00 AM

A thought provoking piece you have crafted, Warren, Well done !!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/27/2018 9:18:00 AM

Thanks so much, Mike, Hope you are having a great holiday weekend.

Robertina B.

Date: 5/26/2018 2:01:00 PM

" A fantastic rhyme Warren.. Profound and true, my friend.. All the best to you! "

Warren Doll
Date: 5/27/2018 9:15:00 AM

Always great to hear from you ,Robertina. Glad you liked it and thanks for your positive comments.