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Nic Nac

1111… he says, more fun. And last year already, I gave him the One. . . . . . . . . . . . . . To remember in November is the way to play… Row row, row your boat, Gently up a stream… Wilson rowed, and so he knowed And said it was like a dream… Madison, you said, more fun… So Grover’s clover came undone, And Willami, the honeybee… Well, just so you know… SHE, played nic nac paddy wac And when Ben got back… A wish was Granted. Four fun… is just what the doctor ordered. Jackson came and the fun began… In thanks again, Linkcoln brought a Ham. George ol boy… great game today! Come join the fun, bring along TJ! So the fun began and the boys played ball… The sun shined bright, There were smiles on them all. A Great game it was! The ball bounced and whirled, aTeam focused to score… And then along came a girl. Odd little thing… they stared in doubt. Scratching their heads and looking about… She wants to play? Is that what she, what she has to say…? Rockin’ on her heels And swaying back, two fours… She Looked at them all, And she said, “Of course”!

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Date: 6/19/2010 3:13:00 PM
I like this storyline and the flow of the words. The rhetorical questions move the piece along with inquisitive thoughts. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/19/2010 10:21:00 AM
wow! thanks everyone! I do appreciate your visits and all your kind, wonderful comments. Many hugs, much love. xo
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Izzy. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:17:00 PM
Many congrats on another wonderful feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:54:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:48:00 PM
Congrats Izzy on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. where u been girlfriend?? so quiet... miss... much ... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:13:00 PM
Congrats Izzy on "Nic Nac" being featured. Vince
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