Cory Long Poet Rhyme

Next Week

Mistakes make the world turn
they are how we learn.

 I tried so hard,
and cried  many tears.

scared to show
the world who I am.

The time has come
to prove them all wrong.

To let everyone see 
who I've  become.

My words  pepper blank pages
for all to read.

Next week my book will be released
Is my book going to hurt me?

I will have to wait and see.
What people are saying next week.

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Don Johnson July 21, 2011 at 6:26 PM dont worry poet of the page, what you write is good n sage, be happy its alright. great poem babe, xo, Don

Carolyn Devonshire July 20, 2011 at 6:39 PM Cory, I hope your book is a huge success! I can see the fame and fortune coming down the pike now. Be happy, my friend. I'm delighted for you. Love, Carolyn

Judy Ball July 20, 2011 at 4:51 AM This is great. So many of us think our mistakes is what makes us who we are but only if we don't learn from them and become betteer. Mistakes don't turn us into fools unless we allow them to. Great job. And I bet your book is a hit. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta July 19, 2011 at 7:07 PM Lovelyed penned sentiments, cory

Don Johnson July 19, 2011 at 4:30 PM inward seeing verse here all be good don't worry mate, soupers love you any rate, be a happy camper :) xo, Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 19, 2011 at 2:27 PM take a chance in life cory ..think positive vibes for success.. does not matter what others think..it is a GREAT accomplishment my friend so enjoy this lovely ride...

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2011 at 2:06 PM congrats on the new book. I always felt so happy when my books appeared at Shadowpoetry for sale. But I think I already told you about the dismal sales part. haha. I will take a look when yours is finished. I want to see what cover you chose!

Lisa Cooper July 19, 2011 at 10:45 AM great pen and congrats on the book deal

Nette Onclaud July 19, 2011 at 10:27 AM oh, is this right?? big congrats and i'm sure your book will rate high, cory... superb work here! :) huggs, nette Cory Long July 19, 2011 at 10:30 AM im worried about my parents :/ not sales :)