Next Time

no need 4 me to go to hell, already here, different levels tell, doing me time, a boring gripe, up or down, next earned, new life? in next time:) Don
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Sivey Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 10:10 AM
Interesting approach to all the levels of Hell! Well I hope you aren't already there!! Thinking pleasant thoughts might help!! Incredible work!!
Lane Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 5:21 AM
Next time let's be closer to each other. Tony
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November 5, 2011 at 8:53 PM
Don,, strong words... now what intrigued this meaning... thank you for sharing... i myself think we are born into hell.... p.d.
Johnson Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 9:03 PM
a response brought to mind by Linda Marie's "Realities"?....sometimes the mind gets a push, do we get words thrust upon us from the other side...
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