Next Life Time

my time is here my deadline has arrived
its time for me to leave the past and the present behind
time to make a new beginning on the other side
it's a cycle that we all have to face in our life
and unfortunately its my time to say good-bye
and don't worry baby my spirit will be there to wipe all those tears rolling down your eyes
and baby i wish you and my family the very very very best 
and please don't cry for me when im laid down to rest
and im glad that its me and not you
because if i lost you i don't know what i would do
baby i couldn't lose you i rather have you lose me 
because if i lost you my mind i would be losing
so my love this are my last words dedicated to you
no matter what happends im always going to love you
so hunny watch over your self and my family too 
and please don't let nobody play my kids for a fool
there's a pain on my right side of my body working it self to the left
and i cant even breath no more theres a pain in my chest
baby hurry get out let me die in piece
i don't want to hear you suffer and see you in your knees
i feel my face numbed and my eyes going to sleep
i look at the clock its a little pass three
so now im dead and i died at 3:09
and i guess i will see my love in the next life time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/25/2009 9:02:00 PM
This is a very sad piece, I can feel your emotions so strongly here...all the love you are pouring out of your soul..not to mention the amazing imagery you portrayed here.. I like your style, very direct and well penned...Great write..God Bless *Tyesha
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