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Newness In Every Situation

A_long pick-up truck ride P_assing in each lane eighteenwheelers untame P_retty near sacred insane R_epeating "Lord be with us" under my breath E_ ternally grateful that he was there H_ allejah stop to refuel although next to a truck stop E_ ven now more eighteenwheelers than ever N_ ever want to travel on interstate again S_ uper human power needed for the hour I_ nvite Guardian Angle to guide us and protect O_ pen eyes and heart to opportunities N_ ewness in seeing the situation

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Date: 1/20/2014 9:27:00 PM
Sara This is a very interesting and unique write. A different kind of style that intrigues the reader. Nicely done. Thanks for the great comment on my Revenge poem.
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Date: 7/9/2011 2:48:00 PM
Love them 18 wheelers ehhehe xo, Don
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Date: 7/9/2011 6:37:00 AM
you made it home.....so be glad.
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Date: 7/5/2011 3:14:00 PM
great little verse, i make much worse, my words just rattle about hey, love it, Don
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Date: 7/5/2011 8:38:00 AM
very creative Acrostic, a nice flow to it. thank you for commenting on Beware Jogger Crossing.
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Date: 7/5/2011 8:20:00 AM
What a way to start my week, reading the words that are flowing from your soul. May you find the inspiration each day to continue writing and sharing your wonderful poetry with us Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:37:00 AM
Very nicely done my friend. Really cute and it depicts the apprehension in us all as we pass those monsters on the road. One little oversight. The 'E' after the 'H' needs a word that starts with 'E'. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/4/2011 4:13:00 PM
intersting play on words, 18 wheelers untame herds. great poem babe, xo, Don
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Date: 7/4/2011 3:56:00 PM
expressions of emotion Sara..danger and trust in the Lord to protect u on the highway so insance.. we used to roll on our own eighteen wheeler back in the eighties and it was awesome then but doubt I would feel comfy now luv.. excellent write ..Sara..happy 4th my friend.. freedom rules..
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