Dr Hitendra Mehta Poet Haiku

Newly Wed Bride Adorned

Coniferous Tree
     newly wed bride adorned 
              merry shadow around 

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By Hitendra Mehta
( Entry for Members Contest - Haiku me Christmas Tree by Andrea Dietrich )

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Doris Culverhouse December 17, 2010 at 4:20 PM congrats on the win!!

Sara Kendrick December 13, 2010 at 3:17 PM Good one..Congratulations..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown December 6, 2010 at 12:33 PM Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest "Haiku Me A Christmas Tree" Hitendra. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick December 5, 2010 at 10:23 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest, Hitendra! Love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 5, 2010 at 8:07 AM Congrats Hitendra on your super win in Andrea's cool contest with this excellent and expressive entry my friend.. enjoy sweet victory today with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta December 5, 2010 at 5:30 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Andrea, Hitendra

Wilma Neels December 5, 2010 at 1:50 AM Hitendra, congratulations on your awesome win in the contest ;-) Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire December 4, 2010 at 9:38 PM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful haiku, Hitendra! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2010 at 4:57 PM Congratulations, Hitendra. This one was quite picturesque!

John Loving Iii December 1, 2010 at 4:45 AM ahhhhha nice comparison. john

Carol Sunshine Brown November 29, 2010 at 11:24 AM May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it hitendra. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire November 29, 2010 at 10:44 AM What a great metaphor, Hitendra! I like the image you give us when you compare the Christmas tree to an adorned bride. Best wishes in Andrea's contest. Peace and blessings, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 29, 2010 at 9:15 AM Breathtaking Hitendra.my friend.. good luck in the contest.. your work is splendid ... enjoyed with luv.

Tahera Mannan November 29, 2010 at 6:53 AM A super entry Hitendra. All the very best.