Newly hatched

newly hatched robins 
announcing sun's up
outside my window



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Shuff Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:49 AM
Best way to be awoken. good Haiku
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Thanks, Terry. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 12:42 AM
I love this haiku. The feeling of hearing robins when you first wake up is marvelous!
Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Thanks, Caren. Most appreciated.
Kannan Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:31 AM
How cute! Great one, Line...
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 10:10 AM
Thank you so much, Supraja. I like your reaction.
Talbot Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 3:25 AM
haiku perfection! Mick
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Casting light on a most simple moment. Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Mick.
Mcleod Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Funny stuff Line. Profound! Very insightful. I like it a lot. Keep em comin'. Trevor
Gauthier Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Aiming for that zen feeling, Trevor. Thanks for your visit and comment.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Lovely!!!
Gauthier Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, Maureen.
Allison Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 7:53 AM
beautiful:--) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, Jan.
Sands Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Very nice Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, Heidi.
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