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Crystol Woods / Hidden Acrostic Contest

I gave Him all thanks when she was born, my sweet event, my newborn, babe sis. All that she did, did my heart adorn. Loving her when seven was valued bliss. I brought Mom warm wash cloths each change time, and told her when new bottles were prime. Joy was snuggling her in bed or a chair. My Elizabeth Jane's skin was fair, with a cute button nose and eyes sky blue. Five ten's have passed and my sis' love stays true.

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Date: 6/27/2025 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your sweet acrostic write. Lovely.... Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 6/14/2025 5:48:00 AM
And a sweet message. My sis turned fifty in May! I wrote her a poem too. She is 14 years younger than me. She brought a lively spirit to the household! Happy Birthday to your wonderful sis, CayCay!
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Date: 6/10/2025 8:05:00 PM
love the creativity and reading about your memory....nicely done!
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Date: 6/10/2025 12:56:00 PM
Very sweet- I love your poem <3
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/10/2025 1:58:00 PM
Thank you. I called her (she's in Texas, me - Florida) and read it, I could hear her smile over the phone. She asked me to email it so she could put it with all her other sis-love poems! Miss her ... CayCay
Date: 6/10/2025 10:10:00 AM
Dear CayCay, I love your story of your sister and those early moments of love and care are just so tender. The way you blend gratitude, memories, and devotion together makes me treasure my own family and friends even more. Such a beautiful, heartfelt piece of your life. Blessings, My Dear CayCay, Daniel
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/10/2025 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel, I do love her so. HEY, since you read my Dad and Appendicitis poem that laid out my Dad issues, remember?. I thought you might like to compare it to the feel in my newest post, as a degreed Psychologist, I think it would interest you, providing u do recall Appendicitis write. This is a spontaneous thought, OK, if you don't, either way, I appreciate you ... CayCay
Date: 6/10/2025 5:28:00 AM
Dearest CayCay, this poem is so heartwarming. Such a beautiful poem to read. Melted my heart<3<3
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/10/2025 2:07:00 PM
I've written my baby so many poems, but she loved this when I read it over the phone. Miss her. Thanks Anne - be golden ... CayCay
Date: 6/9/2025 11:17:00 PM
Such a sweet idea. Truly hidden because the phrase is not the title. But meaning is quite the same. I still have mine waiting to post soon. Goodnight, dear
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Date: 6/9/2025 6:37:00 PM
How SWEET it is, CayCay. Adorable to the nth degree // the way it always should be. ~ Gershon P.S. Check your sp-mail.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/10/2025 2:10:00 PM
I loved dolls and my parents gave me a live one who I've since written many poems for. I get to see her at Thanksgiving, and I give thanks for such. When someone writes 'check soup mail', I feel I'm being summoned to the principal's office, don't know why, but it's true. I'm on my way. Hope I haven't been suspended for my blog behavior. Love, CayCay
Date: 6/9/2025 5:42:00 AM
Awww sweet acrostic for your sis. Wishing you a pleasant week
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/9/2025 1:33:00 PM
You laid 'sweet' on me, thank you. AND pleasant wishes. I am glad you came by with uplifting words. I mailed my Lizzy a copy to put with her sister poem collection - whether she wants to or not, kidding. Poetry hugs .. CayCay
Date: 6/9/2025 3:19:00 AM
I love babies and glad others take care of it. Now go and buy some diapers :) Poetry hugs.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/9/2025 5:26:00 AM
Dear Heart: did you catch the part about 50 years passing since she was born? If I buy diapers it will probably be in the future and not for a baby. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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