New Years Ballad

Centuries old trees are common 
But centenarians on 
The street are a rare sight indeed,
As rare as it could be.
For hours slip and days melt away,
And as youthful spring fades,
Silver strands race to O’ertake. 
Faces once gleaming with dreams
Become creased and weary,  
So cherish each fleeting moment
To do good and repent!
Swap the temporal for the true, 
For an Eden of your own!  

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/30/2016 4:54:00 PM
"For hours slip and days melt away" describes what this whole years has been like so far. Great write Brian.
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Brian Chung
Date: 12/30/2016 9:29:00 PM
Thanks Morgan! I agree, this year slipped past as fast as water in joined palms!
Date: 12/27/2016 5:08:00 AM
So touching ... sunny day flowing into wrinkled darkness ... excellent write, Brian ...
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Brian Chung
Date: 12/27/2016 5:45:00 AM
Thanks so much, Probir!
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