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Dec. 28, 2023 10.11am

New Year 2024 Celebration Minichu


Grand fireworks on display,
as everyone happily embarks in New Year’s
brand new day.

Let us welcome!
Hug the year without doubts and fear,
All come!

Sounds squish,
Bad lucks and tear
Wish!

Grand fireworks on display,
Hug the year without doubts and fear,
Wish!

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Ink Empress

December 30, 2023 at 1:24 AM

Ah what a festive and soulful minichu, fits the mood right now so perfectly. I love how your lines all go together flawlessly. Especially the rhymes are too very creative. I never really enjoyed fireworks before, but lately i dont mind, sometimes i get scared of fireworks hah. I really felt the line “ Hug the year without doubts and fear, Wish!” What a beautiful wish it is! Best wishes for the contest dear talented poet. Pleasure always reading your work

Len Gasun

January 2, 2024 at 6:15 PM

Belated thank you from the bottom of my heart for reading my poem and your encouraging comments my dear poet friend Ink and thank you so much also for your loving wishes. I'm glad you like to read my humble poems. May God bless you always. Hugs

Joseph May

December 28, 2023 at 6:26 PM

A time to celebrate, Happy New Year

Len Gasun

December 29, 2023 at 8:19 PM

Only 2 days to count my dear poet friend Joseph May. Thanks for reading my poem. Happy New Year too! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

December 28, 2023 at 12:43 PM

I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write. The fireworks are so pretty. I also did one for 2024. Hugs... "Happy New Year 2024" .................

Len Gasun

December 29, 2023 at 8:18 PM

Thank you for reading my poem and enjoying it my dear poet friend Paula. I agree my dear poet friend. Fireworks are so pretty. I'll come and visit your page in a short moment my dear. Happy New Year 2024 too. I wish you all God's bountiful blessings for the whole new year round. Hugs

Len Gasun

December 27, 2023 at 7:24 PM

Dec. 28, 2023 10.11am

New Year 2024 Celebration Minichu

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