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New Year 2024 Celebration Minichu

Grand fireworks on display,
as everyone happily embarks in New Year’s
brand new day.

Let us welcome!
Hug the year without doubts and fear,
All come!

Sounds squish,
Bad lucks and tear
Wish!

Grand fireworks on display,
Hug the year without doubts and fear,
Wish!

Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2023

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Ink Empress Date: 12/30/2023 1:24:00 AM Ah what a festive and soulful minichu, fits the mood right now so perfectly. I love how your lines all go together flawlessly. Especially the rhymes are too very creative. I never really enjoyed fireworks before, but lately i dont mind, sometimes i get scared of fireworks hah. I really felt the line “ Hug the year without doubts and fear, Wish!” What a beautiful wish it is! Best wishes for the contest dear talented poet. Pleasure always reading your work Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 1/2/2024 6:15:00 PM Belated thank you from the bottom of my heart for reading my poem and your encouraging comments my dear poet friend Ink and thank you so much also for your loving wishes. I'm glad you like to read my humble poems. May God bless you always. Hugs

Joseph May Date: 12/28/2023 6:26:00 PM A time to celebrate, Happy New Year Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 12/29/2023 8:19:00 PM Only 2 days to count my dear poet friend Joseph May. Thanks for reading my poem. Happy New Year too! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/28/2023 12:43:00 PM I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write. The fireworks are so pretty. I also did one for 2024. Hugs... "Happy New Year 2024" ................. Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 12/29/2023 8:18:00 PM Thank you for reading my poem and enjoying it my dear poet friend Paula. I agree my dear poet friend. Fireworks are so pretty. I'll come and visit your page in a short moment my dear. Happy New Year 2024 too. I wish you all God's bountiful blessings for the whole new year round. Hugs

Len Gasun Date: 12/27/2023 7:24:00 PM Dec. 28, 2023 10.11am Login to Reply