Caryl Muzzey Poet Haiku

New Puppy Restless

new puppy restless
nighttime cries for company…
come torpid coldness 

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifteenth Place Winner ~ "Very Strict Haiku” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Henderson
Nov. 29, 2011

Kigo: torpid coldness/winter
Caryl Muzzey
11/9/2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 16, 2011 at 11:31 AM Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest Caryl. Love, Carol

Broken Butterfly November 13, 2011 at 7:53 AM This Haiku is so interesting Caryl. A very good break. I see by the comments below you placed in the contest. Congratulations. I have added you as a fav poet. I hope that is okay with you.

Sara Kendrick November 12, 2011 at 5:23 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 11, 2011 at 12:11 PM oh poor puppy-- but you definitely brought us there with this haiku, Caryl! Congrats! :)

Kash Poet November 11, 2011 at 11:15 AM A lovely haiku here Caryl.Enjoyed.Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A November 11, 2011 at 1:15 AM C.M.~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CHARLES STRICK HAIKU *YIKKEEESS~lesson~ , I COULD NEVER PULL THIS OFF* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 10, 2011 at 8:45 PM Congrats Caryl on a wonderful win in this contest for these fascinating words luv..

Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2011 at 8:29 PM Great vocabulary in this one: torpid! Congrats on the HM, Caryl.

Carol Sunshine Brown November 10, 2011 at 5:46 AM I have enjoyed reading your poetry and wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Caryl. May inspiration come into your soul each and every day. I will stop in at the Soup and see how you are doing from time to time. Love and best wishes always, Carol