New Path

when scarred earth cedes ~ breaking ground is a good thing








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Lawless Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Mr. Frost would enjoy this "Road Less Traveled" Senryu
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June 14, 2018 at 5:32 PM
That's a thrilling thought :) thank you John! xomo!
Gentile Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 10:04 AM
A great Monoku!! we all need a new path at some point Happy Monday xxoo
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June 11, 2018 at 9:59 PM
Amen to that. Thank you Mike! xomo :)
Devonshire Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:46 PM
An insightful message in just one line. Wonderful writing, Maureen! Hugs, Carolyn
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June 11, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Thank you so much Carolyn, hugs n' love! xomo :)
Wolf Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:19 PM
Clever conclusion! :) gw
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June 11, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Thank you my sweet friend :) xomo!
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 3:13 PM
- Yes it is ... well said / written, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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June 11, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Thank you Sunshine! :) xomo
Michael Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 11:41 AM
A new way, an old way...a different way....but a way...Nice monoku
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June 11, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Thank you Arturo :) Blessings for a lovely day to you! xomo
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Great one Maureen! I love it :) A favorite too :)
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June 11, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Thank you Heidi! For the fave and your constant support, your kindness is appreciated :) A lovely day to you dear poetess! xomo
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