Bryn Strudwick Poet Verse

New Love

NEW LOVE

I was blue
Then came you
Right on cue
Our love grew
Deep and true

Vows we made
Not obeyed
And you strayed
Made love fade
I’m afraid

10th January 2022
What's New Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Joseph May

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Kim Merryman January 19, 2022 at 7:01 AM Starts out happy and ends so sad. Well expressed, Bryn! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex January 17, 2022 at 9:31 PM The poem, 'New Love', is beautifully written in this style. Congratulations!

Joseph May January 17, 2022 at 7:58 PM Very nicely penned Bryn, Congrats on your win

Rico Leffanta January 11, 2022 at 10:50 AM Time's eldest story well said! Aloha!