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New Jerusalem

new jerusalem will see the morning star fall - before the lion of judah Heavenly Monoku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues 1/24/19

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2019 10:16:00 AM

Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/31/2019 2:39:00 PM

Thank you very much Sara! :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/25/2019 3:23:00 PM

An excellent Monoku! Very well done.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/25/2019 4:02:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/25/2019 12:24:00 AM

Inspired! Well done, Timothy.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/25/2019 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Miss Line. I greatly appreciate your kind words.