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Larry Bradfield

New Ice

geese still on the pond 
ice tells them they should have flown
winter came early


11-6-19
Contest: A Late Fall or Early Winter Haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Copyright © Larry Bradfield | Year Posted 2019

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November 15, 2019 at 8:39 AM

Amazing! Amazing! So amazing. So deep, my senses are pulled out to tick a yes in every line. Great work friend.

November 13, 2019 at 6:52 AM

Congrats on your win, Larry. I like the intended feel of this poem.

November 9, 2019 at 1:23 AM

love the imagery Larry, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 8, 2019 at 4:59 AM

- Congratulations on your great win, Larry - We have already "tasted" the snow - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 7, 2019 at 7:56 PM

Nice one, Larry. Congrats for your win

November 7, 2019 at 7:55 PM

Larry, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku, thanks for participating!

Charles Messina

November 7, 2019 at 7:48 PM

Don't tell that to Bear Grylls (lol) Great haiku Larry. Congrats on your win. Charlie

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 6, 2019 at 1:21 PM

Hello Larry Bradfield, I guess some birds wait too long to fly south for the winter. So nice to meet you. Have a nice day my friend.

Larry Bradfield

November 6, 2019 at 6:45 PM

Thank you, Darlene

November 6, 2019 at 11:33 AM

Good one, Larry.

Larry Bradfield

November 6, 2019 at 12:53 PM

Thanks, Line!!

November 6, 2019 at 9:17 AM

Great one Larry ! :)

Larry Bradfield

November 6, 2019 at 12:53 PM

Thank you, Heidi!

November 6, 2019 at 8:24 AM

The ice is cooking their goose! Enjoyed the ku!

Larry Bradfield

November 6, 2019 at 8:28 AM

Good way to put it Kim...Thanks!

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