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New Grass

New grass 
Colorful fur 
Protecting Mother Earth 
Greening up beautifully in spring 
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10th grade11th grade12thcinquain

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M. L. Kiser

December 12, 2018 at 5:43 AM

That's how it does! You've painted the visual with these words.

Caren Krutsinger

December 12, 2018 at 6:39 AM

I am a professional painter, writing is just for fun.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

December 11, 2018 at 5:12 PM

Very cool Cinquain poem, Caren. Your poetic imagery is spot on! Lovely sunburst of ink bloom. Pastoral poetry, so serene. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I was listening to this tranquil song, "If It Takes Forever" by Michael e while reading this fine poem. Love and hugs always. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Guym4_7cfjU

Caren Krutsinger

December 11, 2018 at 7:41 PM

Thank you Freddie. I love the earth, and the greener the better!

Andrea Dietrich

December 11, 2018 at 3:01 PM

lovely metaphor, colorful fur!

Caren Krutsinger

December 11, 2018 at 7:41 PM

Thank you Andrea. I am so in love with the outside it is ridiculous.

Mystic Rose Rose

December 11, 2018 at 12:06 PM

White wiccan all the way hon, xi

Caren Krutsinger

December 11, 2018 at 7:42 PM

thank you so much! Best compliment.

Rhona Mcferran

December 11, 2018 at 11:51 AM

I second Line's comment- the "colorful fur" grabbed my attention, too! Love it!! ;)

Caren Krutsinger

December 11, 2018 at 7:42 PM

Thank you Rhona. I appreciate it.

Line Gauthier

December 11, 2018 at 9:03 AM

I love the image of grass as Mother Earth's colorful fur, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger

December 11, 2018 at 11:49 AM

I was going to say skin, but fur sounded so much wiser.

Billy Jones

December 11, 2018 at 7:26 AM

Very nice one and so true, thank you ^_^

Caren Krutsinger

December 11, 2018 at 8:06 AM

Thank you; I am ready for spring every season actually.

Mystic Rose Rose

December 11, 2018 at 7:11 AM

Your poem makes me hope for a lovely spring. How beautiful it is to own HOPE. Without it we'd all be brown grass, lol, Love is a thought today poetess. Please write a poem about the value of poetry in our lives, I will wait for it, with bells on. xo

Caren Krutsinger

December 11, 2018 at 8:06 AM

Thanks Pixie Dust. I appreciate it.