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New Grass

New grass 
Colorful fur 
Protecting Mother Earth 
Greening up beautifully in spring 
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Date: 12/12/2018 5:43:00 AM
That's how it does! You've painted the visual with these words.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2018 6:39:00 AM
I am a professional painter, writing is just for fun.
Date: 12/11/2018 5:12:00 PM
Very cool Cinquain poem, Caren. Your poetic imagery is spot on! Lovely sunburst of ink bloom. Pastoral poetry, so serene. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I was listening to this tranquil song, "If It Takes Forever" by Michael e while reading this fine poem. Love and hugs always. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Guym4_7cfjU
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2018 7:41:00 PM
Thank you Freddie. I love the earth, and the greener the better!
Date: 12/11/2018 3:01:00 PM
lovely metaphor, colorful fur!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2018 7:41:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I am so in love with the outside it is ridiculous.
Date: 12/11/2018 12:06:00 PM
White wiccan all the way hon, xi
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2018 7:42:00 PM
thank you so much! Best compliment.
Date: 12/11/2018 11:51:00 AM
I second Line's comment- the "colorful fur" grabbed my attention, too! Love it!! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2018 7:42:00 PM
Thank you Rhona. I appreciate it.
Date: 12/11/2018 9:03:00 AM
I love the image of grass as Mother Earth's colorful fur, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2018 11:49:00 AM
I was going to say skin, but fur sounded so much wiser.
Date: 12/11/2018 7:26:00 AM
Very nice one and so true, thank you ^_^
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thank you; I am ready for spring every season actually.
Date: 12/11/2018 7:11:00 AM
Your poem makes me hope for a lovely spring. How beautiful it is to own HOPE. Without it we'd all be brown grass, lol, Love is a thought today poetess. Please write a poem about the value of poetry in our lives, I will wait for it, with bells on. xo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/11/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Pixie Dust. I appreciate it.