New Glow

Dawn breaks, sun rise.
All these clouds can’t stop my shine.
Make it rain sun shower
Skin tan that’s sun power.

Every minute slowed down,
Enjoy every hour.
The time together,
Forever ours.

I see your smile,
Takes away breath.
Good mixed in with the bad things,
Sweet and sour.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Tellaferro Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Love the feel of this one brings memories of the beach and playing in the sun. Nice work, I still am reading. Fav line: Make it rain sun shower. Skin tan that’s sun power."
Swana  Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Thanks so much!! I’ve reciprocated the love and read your works as well, do me an favor and share the word thanks
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