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New Day

Blooming flowers yawn
Green leafs shake in the warm sun
New day just begun

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/12/2010 9:53:00 AM

Congratulations Jessica on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Flowers,Trees & Shrubs I Luv Haiku". Love, Carol

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/11/2010 2:39:00 PM

Fine haku - I noticed you stuck to the 5-7-5 format. Sounds like you had a great morning! Keep 'em coming Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

John Freeman

Date: 8/9/2010 5:15:00 PM

Congratulations Jessica, on your second place, Agape, Moses

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/8/2010 10:47:00 AM

lovely, congrats on your win

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/8/2010 5:43:00 AM

Congrats. on your win this Haiku contest. Lovely words Jessica... Always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2010 10:01:00 PM

What a great imagery. Love this personification. Congrats!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/7/2010 9:53:00 PM

Congrats on the 2nd place win, jessica

Raj Nandy

Date: 8/7/2010 9:25:00 PM

JESSICA , I LOVED THIS CUTE THREE LINER VERY MUCH ! Love , - Raj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/7/2010 6:36:00 AM

Congrats Jessica on your success in my Haiku contest with this rare beauty.. appreciate your constant support.. with luv..

John Rhinem

Date: 8/7/2010 12:43:00 AM

Smile ~ Yawning flowers blooming and waking up; from their long rest and hibernations!? Green leaves shaking in the warm sun; (Philippians 2:12)!? And, the new day dawning; bittersweet? I Pray more sweet than bitter? "Very Well Spoken Beautiful Jessica Arteaga!!!" ~ "As Always, 'My Love to You Forever & Eternally," John!:) ~ Smile, on we go dear....

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