New Day

Blooming flowers yawn
Green leafs shake in the warm sun
New day just begun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations Jessica on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Flowers,Trees & Shrubs I Luv Haiku". Love, Carol
Anish Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Fine haku - I noticed you stuck to the 5-7-5 format. Sounds like you had a great morning! Keep 'em coming Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Freeman Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations Jessica, on your second place, Agape, Moses
Roberts Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 10:47 AM
lovely, congrats on your win
Falotico Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 5:43 AM
Congrats. on your win this Haiku contest. Lovely words Jessica... Always Michael
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:01 PM
What a great imagery. Love this personification. Congrats!
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:53 PM
Congrats on the 2nd place win, jessica
Nandy Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:25 PM
JESSICA , I LOVED THIS CUTE THREE LINER VERY MUCH ! Love , - Raj
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Congrats Jessica on your success in my Haiku contest with this rare beauty.. appreciate your constant support.. with luv..
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August 7, 2010 at 12:43 AM
Smile ~ Yawning flowers blooming and waking up; from their long rest and hibernations!? Green leaves shaking in the warm sun; (Philippians 2:12)!? And, the new day dawning; bittersweet? I Pray more sweet than bitter? "Very Well Spoken Beautiful Jessica Arteaga!!!" ~ "As Always, 'My Love to You Forever & Eternally," John!:) ~ Smile, on we go dear....
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