For: Bite Size Contest no. 133
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
January 14, 2026
Never has the dawn seemed so dim, Eyes that once shined bright also retreat~ Where is the choir of birds on the air? Does the sound of the sea become the sound of the wind Against your heart like an explosion of fire? Yonder is not your enemy but one who embellishes your soul.
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