New Day

Black river of thought Falling deep Last of Sun's ray sought Hope not a peep Observe life's dream Audience view Life's stage is an act, with ice cream ! It's a wonderful new day, as observer of the dream anew

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/24/2023 2:51:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Congrats! Your first posted poem is a winner.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/23/2023 9:25:00 PM

Welcome Bruce to Poetry Soup. Congratulations! Have Good Days.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2023 12:04:00 PM

How nice a little poem and big congrats on the win, Bruce. I hope you are back here to stay,