New Day

Black river of thought
     Falling deep
Last of Sun's ray sought
     Hope not a peep

Observe life's dream
     Audience view
Life's stage is an act, with ice cream !
     It's a wonderful new day, as observer of the dream anew

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Beata Agustin

August 24, 2023 at 2:51 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Congrats! Your first posted poem is a winner.