Ann Gilmour Poet Haiku

New Born Blue

new born eyes open
deepest pools of blue shine bright
to new mums delight

Written 13th July 2019

Contest: haiku-hue
Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

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Gary Radice February 16, 2022 at 1:45 AM The new born's gaze into the mother's face with the intrinsic need of wanting attachment and security. Lovely words Ann. Cheers - Gary Ann Gilmour April 2, 2022 at 4:57 PM Bless you Gary for your kind words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

William Kelii Kekaula February 15, 2022 at 11:52 PM Righteously penned, Ann, my compliments on your winning entry my friend, Aloha~William, Cheers! Ann Gilmour April 2, 2022 at 4:56 PM Thank you so much for your compliments ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier February 13, 2020 at 8:37 PM Lovely, Ann. Ann Gilmour February 14, 2020 at 11:49 AM Thank you Line, that first sight of a new born, there is nothing else to compare... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Alexis Y. July 14, 2019 at 1:02 PM Hi Ann, The birth of child is such amazing event! I enjoyed the read. Thanks for stopping by my page recently. Have a great day:-) Alexis Ann Gilmour July 15, 2019 at 3:00 AM Thank you Alexis and so glad you enjoyed my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis July 13, 2019 at 11:11 AM A miraculous birth , a wondrous Haiku dearest, Ann! xxx Ann Gilmour July 13, 2019 at 12:51 PM Gosh thank you so much for your lovely comments dear Demetrios. I am always pleased to hear from you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 13, 2019 at 8:39 AM This is fantastic Ann! I expect to see it on the winners list ;) good luck in the contest! xomo Ann Gilmour July 13, 2019 at 8:47 AM Thank you so much Maureen, I have only just written it as the contest had reached 34, so only just made it! Many thanks for your lovely comments - I hope you are right... Kindest thoughts Ann xx