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New Born Blue

new born eyes open deepest pools of blue shine bright to new mums delight Written 13th July 2019 Contest: haiku-hue Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues Poetry Soup Syllable counter 5/7/5 Contest A STRAND (1074) Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Gary Radice

Date: 2/16/2022 1:45:00 AM

The new born's gaze into the mother's face with the intrinsic need of wanting attachment and security. Lovely words Ann. Cheers - Gary

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/2/2022 4:57:00 PM

Bless you Gary for your kind words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/15/2022 11:52:00 PM

Righteously penned, Ann, my compliments on your winning entry my friend, Aloha~William, Cheers!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/2/2022 4:56:00 PM

Thank you so much for your compliments ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/13/2020 8:37:00 PM

Lovely, Ann.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/14/2020 11:49:00 AM

Thank you Line, that first sight of a new born, there is nothing else to compare... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/14/2019 1:02:00 PM

Hi Ann, The birth of child is such amazing event! I enjoyed the read. Thanks for stopping by my page recently. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/15/2019 3:00:00 AM

Thank you Alexis and so glad you enjoyed my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/13/2019 11:11:00 AM

A miraculous birth , a wondrous Haiku dearest, Ann! xxx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/13/2019 12:51:00 PM

Gosh thank you so much for your lovely comments dear Demetrios. I am always pleased to hear from you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/13/2019 8:39:00 AM

This is fantastic Ann! I expect to see it on the winners list ;) good luck in the contest! xomo

Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/13/2019 8:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Maureen, I have only just written it as the contest had reached 34, so only just made it! Many thanks for your lovely comments - I hope you are right... Kindest thoughts Ann xx