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New Benches

new benches placed 
in park at intervals..
pine pollen coats all

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Jack Jordan

March 19, 2013 at 4:41 PM

Very nice. I've lived through several pine pollen storms, so I can "see" what you have written. Jack

Russell Sivey

March 19, 2013 at 8:36 AM

This is a very true write, those benches at the park are surely coated with pollen and if you're allergic I wouldn't try going there! You have written a terrific poem, one that I really enjoyed reading this morning! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!