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New Beginnings

Newborn neatly fits into this role, Epitome of noisy and new! Without much ambition, just a goal - Being fed and rocked, to name a few. Exit and entry, baby's first "must", Going through A-maze of being born. Inside out and here's the world at last, No way back, you ought to carry on. Nothing's nicer than float carefree, Infantry's indeed least stressful stage. Not for long, time flies by fast, sweet pea, Getting born now means coming of age. So many more beginnings you will be! January 23, 2021 Contest: New Beginnings Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 1/25/2021 12:53:00 PM
Heya Margarita, your poem captures the carefree nascency of life, whilst pointing out gently the inexorable changes ahead, but in a matter of fact way which I really like, this style works so well, best wishes in the contest, cheers David
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/25/2021 3:26:00 PM
Thank you. Birth (the addendum:), the small beginning to the rest... M.
Date: 1/23/2021 1:48:00 PM
an absolutely charming take on new beginnings Margarita, good luck in the contest this is so beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/23/2021 7:38:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. M.

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