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The precious golden orb will soon arise And dawn prepares to slowly slip away. A blush of pink expands across the skies; The sun cuts through at last - a brand new day. Extract from my poem 'Dutiful dawn' Entry for 'Arbitrium Divisa Poetry Contest' sponsored by Gregory Barden 27.05.19

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Date: 6/13/2019 5:55:00 PM
such a wonderful way to paint the new day. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 6/13/2019 9:50:00 AM
Lovely, Wendy. Congrats on your win.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/13/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thank you,Line. There were some super snippets!
Date: 5/27/2019 11:40:00 PM
G'day Wendy … there's nothing that feels better than sunrise. The colour of the sky, crispness in the air, and bird song - thank you Wendy
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/9/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thank YOU, Lindsay for the lovely comment and colourful start to my day! What a beautiful bird. I must research the name! Ah, I've just been looking. Is it a rainbow/gouldian finch?
Date: 5/27/2019 7:46:00 AM
Stunning, Wendy. A beauty.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/9/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thank you,Line. It's from one of my first sonnets here on Soup ( or anywhere for that matter!)

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