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Nevermore!

Fear, fear, go away
Live life to the fullest every day!

Why the deer in the headlights look?
Am anything but a crook!

So strike up the band
God is in command!

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James Gibbons

Date: 11/20/2010 7:05:00 PM

Hello Joshua, you gave me a laugh; you're right - to bad the horses fell off the cliff - thanks for stopping by and the comment re my "Brethren of the Wind" poem. I like your stuff, to the point, rhymes and short. thanks Jim Gibbons

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/16/2010 10:46:00 PM

Yes, He is Joshua!! Though this life throws so many curves, God is in control. Thanks for visitng my page and leaving comments for me. Always, Audrey

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/16/2010 10:09:00 PM

Excellent rhyming words.Profound thoughts.A great couplet.

Suresh Iyer

Date: 11/16/2010 9:18:00 PM

Beautifully put by you.

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/13/2010 2:56:00 AM

It rippled holy thoughts in me.Very niec,Joshua

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2010 8:15:00 AM

Indeed, with God at the helm we have no need to fear, Joshua. Enjoyed the "deer in the headlights" analogy. You might consider entering this super poem in Thvia's "analogies" contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2010 8:56:00 PM

WEll, keep writing like this and your fears will all be dispelled!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/9/2010 4:46:00 PM

Amen Joshua.. for sure HE is in command and enjoy your lines so well written ..great title too.. appreciate your warm and welcome comments my friend.. praise HIS HOLY NAME.. with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2010 2:09:00 PM

Interesting work..I enjoyed readin this one..I have never seen a deer in the headlights but am always hoping that they will stop and not come into the road or turn and run back into the woods ..I would hate to hit one.I was delighted that you stopped by and read my work..Sara

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