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Nevermind

how much truth could our world contain ~ all of it until the humans came so how much lies do we contain ~ none whatsoever we pass on blame then how much balance does god contain ~ that depends more or less the same these monokus are pointless and lame ~ no just vagaries of my brain By David Kavanagh 4x17

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Gary Radice

Date: 10/7/2022 5:15:00 AM

Keep them coming David. These make for superb reading. Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/7/2022 6:05:00 AM

Thank you Gary, they do take a little figuring out, I was probably lucky this one was coming together nicely, so I kept pushing for another line, but sometimes they fail miserably and end up in the bin, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2022 1:04:00 PM

I feel the same as Milt here. but I do enjoy reading a superb monoku. Don't you?

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/6/2022 1:29:00 PM

You bet I do Andrea, now and then I try to string them along, ups the ante, but can be worth it, cheers David

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/6/2022 10:47:00 AM

Ah, David. I do love it when a person ruminates on the grander questions of life. Enjoyed your musings.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/6/2022 10:58:00 AM

Thank you Milton, the story of my life, summed up in 4 Monokus, and in the end just vagaries, but it’s a start, cheers David