David Kavanagh Poet Monoku

Nevermind

how much truth could our world contain ~ all of it until the humans came 

so how much lies do we contain ~ none whatsoever we pass on blame 

then how much balance does god contain ~ that depends more or less the same 

these monokus are pointless and lame ~ no just vagaries of my brain 


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David Kavanagh

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Gary Radice October 7, 2022 at 5:15 AM Keep them coming David. These make for superb reading. Cheers - Gary David Kavanagh October 7, 2022 at 6:05 AM Thank you Gary, they do take a little figuring out, I was probably lucky this one was coming together nicely, so I kept pushing for another line, but sometimes they fail miserably and end up in the bin, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2022 at 1:04 PM I feel the same as Milt here. but I do enjoy reading a superb monoku. Don't you? David Kavanagh October 6, 2022 at 1:29 PM You bet I do Andrea, now and then I try to string them along, ups the ante, but can be worth it, cheers David

L Milton Hankins October 6, 2022 at 10:47 AM Ah, David. I do love it when a person ruminates on the grander questions of life. Enjoyed your musings. David Kavanagh October 6, 2022 at 10:58 AM Thank you Milton, the story of my life, summed up in 4 Monokus, and in the end just vagaries, but it’s a start, cheers David