Neverland Or Wonderland

To our demons we know, With a broken heart in hand. To demand for nothing, But our soul's to keep. Creeping in our dreams, Not letting us scream. So maybe we have to go to the extreme, Without getting on there type of level. To have a look into the devil's eyes, Without saying anymore goodbyes. So please don't cry, I'll be here to dry you're eyes. We have the whole sky, to fly all the way to neverland. Or maybe we can go to wonderland, To lose our minds. And be one of a kind, So we can leave everything behind.

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/22/2017 4:27:00 AM

Hi Eduardo. You have a fine verse. Keep writing, as you comment on other's works, and participate in any contest. Know your best writing style, and stick to it. From there, the rest will come as easy as bread with butter!! ;-)

Darren White

Date: 6/11/2017 11:00:00 AM

Hi Eduardo, the best way for people to start reading your poems, is to actively start reading theirs. Because that is the way they discover you are here!. So visit other people's pages and I am sure they will come and visit yours :) Now: your poem. It rhymes and it tells the story of Neverland, which I very much like. If only we could all go there, and stay young forever! Welcome to PoetrySoup :)

Eduardo Martin Castro Jr

Date: 6/10/2017 8:13:00 PM

Hello, My name is Eduardo Castro i am new to poetrysoup. If you can please let me know what you guys/girls think, I would love that... thank you ?