Darren White Poet Enclosed Rhyme

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Neverland

NEVERLAND

Softly water nibbles at your toes
And eats some sand away around
Sun sneaks around togetherness
Inside I am all warm tenderness
This day reminds me how I found
This peace in me, and here you doze

Relaxed and happy at my feet
I hum a song, bend over, kiss,
My fingers playing with your hair
Your nose, your mouth, resting where
My mouth meets yours, this is
My favourite place to meet.

I want this day to never end
To be so perfect, Neverland
Where there's no school, just you and I
Where we're accepted, need not lie
Where we can walk hand in hand
Such lovely dream, sweet boyfriend.

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 6, 2017 at 12:22 PM This is such a sweet and tender pen Darren, love it :) xomo Darren White April 6, 2017 at 12:32 PM Thank you, I love the poem too.

Paloma P October 27, 2016 at 4:00 AM Nice, this warmed me up, especially since we've just experienced our first snow flakes of the season. :) Darren White October 27, 2016 at 4:01 AM Thanks :) No snow here yet.

Jan Allison October 26, 2016 at 3:18 PM What a dreamy romantic poem.I hope and pray one day this will happen for you and you can walk hand I hand my friend... anything is possible especially I the last day of dreams and neverland:-) hugs Jan xx Darren White October 26, 2016 at 11:11 PM Thanks Jan :) I loved the photo, just HAD to write something for it. And yes, can't wait to feel his hand in mine...