Neverland

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NEVERLAND Softly water nibbles at your toes And eats some sand away around Sun sneaks around togetherness Inside I am all warm tenderness This day reminds me how I found This peace in me, and here you doze Relaxed and happy at my feet I hum a song, bend over, kiss, My fingers playing with your hair Your nose, your mouth, resting where My mouth meets yours, this is My favourite place to meet. I want this day to never end To be so perfect, Neverland Where there's no school, just you and I Where we're accepted, need not lie Where we can walk hand in hand Such lovely dream, sweet boyfriend.

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/6/2017 12:22:00 PM

This is such a sweet and tender pen Darren, love it :) xomo

Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 12:32:00 PM

Thank you, I love the poem too.

Paloma P

Date: 10/27/2016 4:00:00 AM

Nice, this warmed me up, especially since we've just experienced our first snow flakes of the season. :)

Darren White
Date: 10/27/2016 4:01:00 AM

Thanks :) No snow here yet.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/26/2016 3:18:00 PM

What a dreamy romantic poem.I hope and pray one day this will happen for you and you can walk hand I hand my friend... anything is possible especially I the last day of dreams and neverland:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 10/26/2016 11:11:00 PM

Thanks Jan :) I loved the photo, just HAD to write something for it. And yes, can't wait to feel his hand in mine...