Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

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Neverland

Wishing I could have been just like you 
Never growing up and never growing old 
Flying to Never Land there you go 
Facing dangers your spirit grows bold 

Hurrying through the lands and all the seas 
All your magical adventures there unfolds 
Watching you I could touch all those trees 
Great memories of you in my heart I still hold 

Peter Pan the boy that never grows up 
And for that I can't really blame you 
Protecting all your dreams inside a cup 
While Tinker pouted and saved your life too 

Peter Pan there you are in Neverland 
Never growing up, never growing old so you stay 
Your catchy magic will never end that I know 
As Tinkerbell spreads her magic powder all the way. 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014


November,14,2014

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Richard Poor November 20, 2014 at 1:37 PM I like it... Dorian Petersen Potter November 20, 2014 at 3:42 PM Thank you Richard! :) xxxx D

Gary Bateman November 15, 2014 at 8:37 PM "D" -- A beautiful and enchanting fantasy and fairy tale write here. Very Well-Done!! This one's a "7" and a definite "FAV." Best Always, Gary Dorian Petersen Potter November 20, 2014 at 3:41 PM Hi Gary my dear sweet friend! Thank you so very much for stopping by and all. You haven't the faintest idea how much I appreciate you in all. I know you're the kindest of friends. God bless you always and your family for all you do :) xxxx D.