Neverland

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Wishing I could have been just like you Never growing up and never growing old Flying to Never Land there you go Facing dangers your spirit grows bold Hurrying through the lands and all the seas All your magical adventures there unfolds Watching you I could touch all those trees Great memories of you in my heart I still hold Peter Pan the boy that never grows up And for that I can't really blame you Protecting all your dreams inside a cup While Tinker pouted and saved your life too Peter Pan there you are in Neverland Never growing up, never growing old so you stay Your catchy magic will never end that I know As Tinkerbell spreads her magic powder all the way. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,14,2014

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Richard Poor

Date: 11/20/2014 1:37:00 PM

I like it...

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/20/2014 3:42:00 PM

Thank you Richard! :) xxxx D

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/15/2014 8:37:00 PM

"D" -- A beautiful and enchanting fantasy and fairy tale write here. Very Well-Done!! This one's a "7" and a definite "FAV." Best Always, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/20/2014 3:41:00 PM

Hi Gary my dear sweet friend! Thank you so very much for stopping by and all. You haven't the faintest idea how much I appreciate you in all. I know you're the kindest of friends. God bless you always and your family for all you do :) xxxx D.