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Never Think Five Lines Down Poetry Competition

Never
Think that I have
Lost or forgotten dreams
That we shared one night long ago.
Never



Brenda Atry
5/14/2011
Five Lines Down Poetry Competition

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Debbie Guzzi

May 18, 2011 at 3:45 PM

Very nice use of form! Do I have a Japan verse from you yet? hmmm Light & Love

Gwendolen Song

May 17, 2011 at 5:04 PM

HI Brenda! See, this is the trick to great poetry...to say much with so little words. You are still savoring a moment, huh? You are not alone! Great lines here. Thanks for your encouragement and high regards for my wedding rehearsal poem. It is a true poem...such a sad thing to ask your sis to step down from being your maid of honor. Thx again, Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

May 17, 2011 at 2:59 PM

Brenda, I hope you still have a chance to make this dream come true. Your poem is so moving. When we are young, our hearts are filled with dreams. Many will relate to the message here. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

May 17, 2011 at 8:01 AM

Very great work that I am sure will get Brian's attention..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the understanding comments left on my blog about the death of my Rat Terrier, Rocky..Sara