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Never Part

by Michael J Falotico Jagged rocks my feet must cross.. Flames of fire, to caution I must toss.. To touch your inner soul is my quest.. Until your eternal love I must not rest.. Tree lined hills I will climb to the top and stand.. My desire and passion will be your soft land.. Arms stretched out wide to catch your heart.. Once held in my hands we will never part..

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Gary Fields

Date: 6/16/2011 4:43:00 AM

Silly, Silly, Silly! Where does' it say that love has to hurt or something like that. If you are into pain, then this could be a bonus! Broaden your horizon. Say world peace or the greenhouse affect or something like that, That is what the babe's like to hear. But for me, Just keep the write-up Up! Your friend in the pen/G,FIELDS

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/16/2011 1:19:00 AM

What a very sweet and comforting write this is Michael, lucky is Rosanna whose heart you hold your hand...hugs :)

James Foulk

Date: 6/15/2011 8:13:00 PM

such a beautiful piece of poetry. thank you for commenting on Warm breezes.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/15/2011 1:31:00 PM

You always seem to be a man who would go to any length to keep love alive, Michael. That's one of the things about you that I admire most. Where are your clones? Heartfelt and guinely moving poem. Love, Carolyn

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/15/2011 12:24:00 AM

So very romantic and beautiful,Michael :)

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/14/2011 9:17:00 AM

This is very sweet... Full of romance and devotion :). Once held in my hands we will never part...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2011 7:14:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Michael. Please keep sharing your writing with us. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/14/2011 6:36:00 AM

A promise of love forever MJF, beautiful write, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/13/2011 4:51:00 PM

beautiful words to convey beautiful thoughts Michael.. the honesty of your poetry is so evident and u are an open book of poetic art luv.. your Jersey Girl in awe mode once again by her White Knight ..forever and always with luv..

Date: 6/13/2011 3:30:00 PM

Beautiful write Michael, very sweet. I hope your not working to hard either and doing good as well. Love Alexa

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/13/2011 2:59:00 PM

Oo-la-la, 'tis love, 'tis love. Nice one, Michael. :-)