Never Part

by Michael J Falotico


                                             Jagged rocks my feet must cross..
                                          Flames of fire, to caution I must toss..

                                          To touch your inner soul is my quest..
                                          Until your eternal love I must not rest..

                                    Tree lined hills I will climb to the top and stand..
                                       My desire and passion will be your soft land..

                                      Arms stretched out wide to catch your heart..
                                        Once held in my hands we will never part..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 16, 2011 at 4:43 AM
Silly, Silly, Silly! Where does' it say that love has to hurt or something like that. If you are into pain, then this could be a bonus! Broaden your horizon. Say world peace or the greenhouse affect or something like that, That is what the babe's like to hear. But for me, Just keep the write-up Up! Your friend in the pen/G,FIELDS
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June 16, 2011 at 1:19 AM
What a very sweet and comforting write this is Michael, lucky is Rosanna whose heart you hold your hand...hugs :)
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June 15, 2011 at 8:13 PM
such a beautiful piece of poetry. thank you for commenting on Warm breezes.
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June 15, 2011 at 1:31 PM
You always seem to be a man who would go to any length to keep love alive, Michael. That's one of the things about you that I admire most. Where are your clones? Heartfelt and guinely moving poem. Love, Carolyn
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June 15, 2011 at 12:24 AM
So very romantic and beautiful,Michael :)
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June 14, 2011 at 9:17 AM
This is very sweet... Full of romance and devotion :). Once held in my hands we will never part...
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June 14, 2011 at 7:14 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Michael. Please keep sharing your writing with us. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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June 14, 2011 at 6:36 AM
A promise of love forever MJF, beautiful write, love Wilma
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June 13, 2011 at 4:51 PM
beautiful words to convey beautiful thoughts Michael.. the honesty of your poetry is so evident and u are an open book of poetic art luv.. your Jersey Girl in awe mode once again by her White Knight ..forever and always with luv..
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June 13, 2011 at 3:30 PM
Beautiful write Michael, very sweet. I hope your not working to hard either and doing good as well. Love Alexa
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June 13, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Oo-la-la, 'tis love, 'tis love. Nice one, Michael. :-)
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