Jenish Somadas Poet Senryu

Never Mind

white hair came with wrinkles
leanness, paleness and a bend-
time…. don't touch my mind.



Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT N,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Sandra Adams February 14, 2020 at 9:15 PM so sad when the mind is lost in aging...I have seen it... good write Jenish… Happy Valentine's Day to you :) hugs Jenish Somadas February 15, 2020 at 10:39 PM Thank you Sandra for this wonderful message.. Sorry, I couldn't wish you on time... Have a great day..

Gershon Wolf February 13, 2020 at 2:52 PM That's the worst of all, when the mind deteriorates with time. May it never happen to you! :) Gershon Jenish Somadas February 13, 2020 at 10:38 PM May it never happen to anybody.. Thank you for your support..

Vijay Pandit February 13, 2020 at 6:44 AM Superb, Jenish. Excellent write. Jenish Somadas February 13, 2020 at 7:14 AM Thank you Vijay for your kind comment..

Arturo Michael February 13, 2020 at 2:09 AM It's part of the package of life...a hard one to take...prefer the white hair and wrinkles any day...to keep my mind this way... Jenish Somadas February 13, 2020 at 3:02 AM Nowadays, white hair is a fashion and wrinkles will follow.. Mindless people always on top.. lol... Thank you for your wonderful comment..

Tom Cunningham February 13, 2020 at 1:58 AM Sad when time takes everything from you especially the mind. Tom. PS. Soup mail. Jenish Somadas February 13, 2020 at 2:59 AM Thank you Tom for your valuable support.. Have a great day..

Eve Roper February 12, 2020 at 11:02 PM don't touch my mind, reminded me of diminish and Alzheimer's , I saw a few waist away forgetting those around them and if they did remember just a faint smile a glimmer of hope. Jenish, a lot said in a few words Jenish Somadas February 12, 2020 at 11:26 PM Thank you for sharing your experience.. Time is a partial player.. He always plays differently to different souls..Have a great day Eve...