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Rewrite: Justice Take A Step Forward And Don t Look Back


Lover's fears and tears. I place my hands up to my ears, roll my eyes, and walk away. Oh, why does it have to be this way? I take a deep breath and sneak out until the air clears into the comfort of my room and close the door until I hear tranquility and serenity of silence. Where is the justice? He's given me years of happiness with his presence. The years have changed him, and I am ready of his absence. I take a step forward, cast out forget the evil of the past. Lay it all on a pyre, put it a flame, and watch it all go up in flames. 12/17/2018

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Date: 12/18/2018 7:50:00 PM
May these flames be replaced by the steady flame of true love...Nicely done, Eve! Season's best, Gershon
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Date: 12/18/2018 5:46:00 AM
Well written with much truth told. Beautifully done, Eve. Best wishes for a win and much deserving...Charlie
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Date: 12/18/2018 1:44:00 AM
Yes is so sad when people change and grow apart, a beautifully written poem! Also sad when people grow bitter...
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