Rewrite: Justice Take A Step Forward And Don t Look Back
Lover's fears and tears. I place my hands up to my ears, roll my eyes, and walk away. Oh, why does it have to be this way? I take a deep breath and sneak out until the air clears into the comfort of my room and close the door until I hear tranquility and serenity of silence. Where is the justice? He's given me years of happiness with his presence. The years have changed him, and I am ready of his absence. I take a step forward, cast out forget the evil of the past. Lay it all on a pyre, put it a flame, and watch it all go up in flames. 12/17/2018
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