Never Give Up Wishing

I sit upon my doorstep shallow hope now left within broken window across the street road resembles a litter bin no one seems to care to much just get on with their day I wish to be another place to watch kids run and play I close my door, cannot escape dark memories of the past four children here I raise alone As husband left (at last) every day I sit and hope for a remedy I yearn to escape from this ditch but money I can't earn it's Friday morn the phone does ring hi Mother how are you hey Carolyne I have great news to stop you feeling blue a house came up across from me up here in Ambleside the news I could not let sink in I listened as I cried oh Mother am I hearing right many nights I'd sit and pray suddenly through window shone the brightest, lightest ray I gathered up the children excitement plain to see we squealed and laughed and jumped around threw the best leaving party two vans turned up and off we set our new life was ahead a last glance back along the street to me it now was dead the journey was incredible minds filled with hopes and dreams as we reached our brand new house the world could here our screams we ran inside to choose our rooms slight squabble as you'd guess hey I am mum as I did shout oh yes I got the best we decided to explore our amazing neighbourhood mountains, lakes and trees so green we soaked in all we could now twelve years on, my smile still here just can't believe my luck I'll never forget my mothers words that Friday phone call that I took THANK YOU MUM

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/13/2010 4:44:00 AM
Carolyne , what a superbly uplifting piece , in perfect rhyme . Tomorrow is Friday and I hope you receive another wonderful call from someone special ....
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:15:00 AM
I really appreciate being able to read this poem that will warm the hardest heart. Congratulations excellent piece.
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Date: 5/13/2010 2:59:00 AM
A fine tribute
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Date: 5/13/2010 2:47:00 AM
love it thank you too
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