Lorrie Dentmon Poet I do not know?

Never Give Up

WRITTEN BY: LORRIE DENTMON
DATE: JULY 19th, 2009
TITLE: NEVER GIVE UP


NEVER GIVE UP


SO MUCH REGRET,
ONCE WAS A TIME I HAD IT ALL,
BUT ALL OF MY WEAKNESSES,
COULDN'T BREAK MY FALL,
I WANTED SO MUCH,
BUT ONCE I DID,
ONLY TOOK IT FOR GRANTED,
NOW ONLY GOD'LL FORGIVE,
KNOWING I DON'T DESERVE,
YET STILL ASKING FORGIVENESS,
CHOICES I MADE,
TORE YOU'RE WORLD ALL TO PIECES,
SO MUCH LIKE ME,
I CAN ONLY PRAY YOU'RE STRONGER,
NO MATTER WHERE LIFE TAKES YOU,
I'LL ALWAYS BE YOUR MOTHER,
LIVE EACH OF YOUR DAYS,
AS IF IT WAS YOUR LAST,
KEEP FOLLOWING YOUR DREAMS,
AND DON'T FORGET YOUR PAST.

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Jiril Clemons March 2, 2014 at 3:08 PM Wow, the sense of regret to that someone close to you, is deeply felt in this amazing piece, Lorrie. Pure honesty expressed greatly. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Sara Kendrick September 10, 2009 at 2:35 AM Nicely written from a mother's heart. The poem is a good start to reach your goal of the forgiveness that you want. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 24, 2009 at 4:36 AM Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Lorrie. Wishing you the best always in your writing. Love, Carol