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Never Give In

Lately I have been going crazy, So depressed I've just been lazy, I can't seem to get a grip, I sit back as the tears from my eyes begin to drip, I don't know who I a anymore, To see my heart you'd think it was an infected sore, One word to describe me is broken, Because there's so much truth that hasn't been spoken, Do you know how it feels to have your innocence taken from you, Not having a choice on who it goes to, Well I do, So here come put your foot in my shoe, I realize I am destined to drowned, But thats not till I am 6ft underground, For now my heart cries tears of blood, Through my veins the rage begins to flood, On the inside I am twisted and confused, So sick of constantly feelin used, I can never let my demands win, Not today, not tomorrow, no I can never give in.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/25/2010 6:03:00 PM
wonderful rhyme! I would like to say welcome to the Soup, keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your passion and pride... you will find a lot of encouragements here... keep up the great work. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:06:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write... looking forward to many more.. with luv..
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Date: 8/24/2010 5:13:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ashley. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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