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Never Forget That I Love You

Don't slip through my fingers daughter of mine I've quilted the stars of heaven for you and padded the moon with the gauze of the sun Don't look back at the web that you have weaved only look forward to the disengagement of my freedom my Love, I will provide for you, daughter Don't be so quick with your steps and never forget who made those pretty toes, those lovely hands above you I can hear your every sigh, daughter Come rip the veil open with your longings come to my table as you are able come drink from my Merciful cup, Oh daughter, never forget that I Love You, Signed, Sealed, Delivered, Your Heavenly, Father

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Date: 2/22/2024 10:34:00 AM
A great message through your poem or may I say prayer? -Smita
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Date: 2/22/2024 6:30:00 PM
Indeed it is a prayer too Smita, thanks for leaving a comment :)
Date: 2/22/2024 9:16:00 AM
A delightful prayer with a splendid ending. So well composed.
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Date: 2/21/2024 3:30:00 PM
beautiful at every turn; the ending was superb...wasn't expecting it but it's exquisite....God writing his daughter. Lovely and unique...so many pretty lines and words. I especially liked "come drink from my Merciful cup." Have to fave this one...You're softly creative; admire your skill. hugs, Sara
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Date: 2/21/2024 6:10:00 PM
Thanks for your presence here Sara, :)
Date: 2/21/2024 12:32:00 PM
I am sure she will never forget you love her... nicely done my friend..
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Date: 2/21/2024 6:10:00 PM
thanks for reading dear S,
Date: 2/21/2024 11:57:00 AM
Thats love, selfless and unconditional. I felt this and i guess for some reason your words spoke to my soul: so deeply sweet rose: love, for some is just a four letter word, but its important to express that. Say it out loud, for one to feel. And this feels like a heaven sent poem. Love it! Sending you light always
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Date: 2/21/2024 6:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading Ink,

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