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Never Ending Pursuit

Running in circles Attempting to make ends meet A frantic puppy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/9/2012 8:32:00 PM
to make ends meet. hahaha. SO CUTE>
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Rollo West
Date: 12/9/2012 8:35:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo
Date: 12/9/2012 2:00:00 PM
Nice to read your write on this chilly afternoon. Light & Love
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Rollo West
Date: 12/9/2012 2:24:00 PM
Hi Debbie, thank you so much for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo
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Rollo West
Date: 12/9/2012 2:23:00 PM
Date: 12/9/2012 9:58:00 AM
I love this! It's a perfect analogy, if you will....Thanks for commenting on my page..Hugs, Holly Moore
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Rollo West
Date: 12/9/2012 10:35:00 AM
Hi Holly, thank you so much for stopping by and reading my write. Rollo
Date: 12/8/2012 6:45:00 PM
I loved the word play in the line. "Attempting to make ends meet" and then the punch line at the end "A frantic puppy" Very witty and inspired. Bravo!
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Rollo West
Date: 12/9/2012 10:37:00 AM
Hi Jon, thank you so much for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo
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Rollo West
Date: 12/8/2012 7:26:00 PM
Hi Jon, thank you so much for stopping by and the great comment. Rollo
Date: 12/8/2012 6:17:00 PM
This is quite the clever write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous and wondrous poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/8/2012 5:31:00 PM
Ah ha! I can see him trying to catch his tail, such fun to read :)
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Rollo West
Date: 12/8/2012 5:34:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth, thank you so much for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo