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Never Ending Pursuit

Running in circles
Attempting to make ends meet
A frantic puppy

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Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2012 at 8:32 PM

to make ends meet. hahaha. SO CUTE>

Rollo West

December 9, 2012 at 8:35 PM

Hi Andrea, Thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Debbie Guzzi

December 9, 2012 at 2:00 PM

Nice to read your write on this chilly afternoon. Light & Love

Rollo West

December 9, 2012 at 2:24 PM

Hi Debbie, thank you so much for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo

Rollo West

December 9, 2012 at 2:23 PM

Holly Moore

December 9, 2012 at 9:58 AM

I love this! It's a perfect analogy, if you will....Thanks for commenting on my page..Hugs, Holly Moore

Rollo West

December 9, 2012 at 10:35 AM

Hi Holly, thank you so much for stopping by and reading my write. Rollo

Jon A Cavanaugh

December 8, 2012 at 6:45 PM

I loved the word play in the line. "Attempting to make ends meet" and then the punch line at the end "A frantic puppy" Very witty and inspired. Bravo!

Rollo West

December 9, 2012 at 10:37 AM

Hi Jon, thank you so much for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo

Rollo West

December 8, 2012 at 7:26 PM

Hi Jon, thank you so much for stopping by and the great comment. Rollo

Russell Sivey

December 8, 2012 at 6:17 PM

This is quite the clever write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous and wondrous poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!