Never

Oh reality, 
You may detain my dreams for a while
   
But

Never will you succeed, prisoners them 
To keep! 

    
© Demetrios Trifiatis
  06 SEPTEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 9:10 PM
Excellent. You have an iron clad grip on this style my friend.
Yvonne Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:11 AM
that is a great philosophy. not everyone follows their dreams. you are a great writer. any one can write, very few men write what and how they want to write.
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September 7, 2014 at 1:00 AM
Thank you so much for your generous comment! You see, my friend Maurice, the ancient Greek philosophers thought that the best thing is to say the most in the fewest words possible. Since I am Greek and a student of philosophy, I try to follow their advice! Ha-ha!
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