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Never

Oh reality, You may detain my dreams for a while But Never will you succeed, prisoners them To keep! © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 SEPTEMBER 2014

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/6/2014 9:10:00 PM

Excellent. You have an iron clad grip on this style my friend.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/7/2014 1:11:00 AM

that is a great philosophy. not everyone follows their dreams. you are a great writer. any one can write, very few men write what and how they want to write.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/7/2014 1:00:00 AM

Thank you so much for your generous comment! You see, my friend Maurice, the ancient Greek philosophers thought that the best thing is to say the most in the fewest words possible. Since I am Greek and a student of philosophy, I try to follow their advice! Ha-ha!