Neurosis

discover haikus
count syllables like new coins
raw fingers crave pause














Composed: August 1/21
For: Brian Strand August Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 7:17 PM
Brian, congrats on your win with this humorous haiku! Blessings, Kim M
Sambourne Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:25 PM
Thanks very much, Kim. I appreciate your thoughtful comment. Brian
Alex Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 2:34 AM
A haiku with great imagery. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!
Sambourne Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 12:26 PM
Greetings Christuraj. Thank you for the drop by + kind thumbs up. Be well. Brian
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