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Netting some zero's

Everyday hero's going to capture some zero's up in the Mountains where theres lakes streams and fountains Where a war never comes, yet they oft beat on its drum Where theres wealth health and a blood store.' Thats Un-modified to be sure.' Only the best if they need some M n r a less is more see.' All they need is your fealty.! Be quiet as ordered. While is sown worldwide disorder From Nigeria to New Zealand, how their minions love stealing These vampier's gorge on your feelings, in ecstacy they're Reeling..' filling nations with notions' sickness by potions While you just cower in the corner' with less than jack horner As the plums rich they; are taking (while your mind they're baking) Can you remain waiting? while your freedom they're taking!

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Date: 5/30/2024 10:00:00 AM
Hello Joe, your poem packs a powerful anti-establishment punch! The stark imagery of heroes capturing "zeros" while chaos reigns globally is striking. I love how you deftly employ rhyme and wordplay to drive home the themes of oppression and freedom being stripped away. This piece will rouse readers to question the motives of those in power. It is a bold, thought-provoking work. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Joe Maverick
Date: 5/30/2024 12:39:00 PM
Humble thanks from sad yet Wiser heart I hope Daniel..Its Good to see your comment I think its the only way to better our World now 'short of Jesus's returning!
Date: 5/29/2024 6:10:00 PM
It flows so well, Joe Sure are crazy times these. The Aussie leaders have gone off their heads, Take care dear poet friend,SuZ
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Joe Maverick
Date: 5/29/2024 10:51:00 PM
Sister SuZ I will call you.! my how I realise how great the Aussie ethos was..And is from Those Aussies who lived it.. I Denied it for toio long..Yet I Find it was always with me.' I LOVE YOU ALL!!! I am with The freedom fighters.! From Everywhere (yet Australia..?) I can't explain it.!!!

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