Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Nerve

NERVE

Nearer moonlight than us
Nerves of steel skyrocket

Nationwide heroes rise
Nascent aeronautics

News - one small step for man
Neil Armstrong holds world’s hand

naked eye sees heaven

5th Place
4/29/2017
Pleiades N contest

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Probir Gupta May 15, 2017 at 8:05 AM Congratulations ... The last line will linger on ... Kim Rodrigues May 15, 2017 at 8:23 AM Thank you, Probir!

Kim Merryman May 13, 2017 at 8:41 PM What a great way to portray nerve! Congrats on your win, Kim! Blessings, Kim M. Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2017 at 9:43 PM Thank you, Kim!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2017 at 12:16 PM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2017 at 12:27 PM Thank you!

Joseph May May 12, 2017 at 7:27 PM Congrats on your win Kim Kim Rodrigues May 12, 2017 at 8:35 PM Thank you, Joseph! Kim Rodrigues May 12, 2017 at 8:34 PM Thank you, Joseph!

Connie Marcum Wong May 3, 2017 at 1:10 AM This is fantastic Kim! I hope it gets the attention it deserves. 7 ; ) Kim Rodrigues May 3, 2017 at 10:05 AM Thanks so much, Connie! xx

Maria Williams May 3, 2017 at 12:04 AM NASA made their mark back then Kim so wishing you that your Pleiadies makes it mark on the judges - Good luck Kim Rodrigues May 3, 2017 at 10:06 AM Thanks, Maria :)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2017 at 1:11 PM - Great pleiades, Kim :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues May 3, 2017 at 10:07 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise!

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2017 at 6:31 PM wow, the last line really drives it through. Great job, Kim. Quick question for you at Soup mail Kim Rodrigues May 1, 2017 at 10:39 AM Thank you, Andrea!

John Michaels April 30, 2017 at 11:28 AM Love what you've done with this one, Kim. Definitely a unique angle on the theme! Good luck with the contest! Regards, John. Kim Rodrigues May 1, 2017 at 10:39 AM Thank you, John!

Joseph May April 29, 2017 at 9:56 PM A great moment in history..Nicely done Kim Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2017 at 10:02 PM Thank you, Joseph!