Neruda

In his element,
He pauses for a moment:
And takes it all in.

on work and workingsenryu

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Jay Loveless

June 10, 2010 at 10:40 AM

Actually, i went and read this just now after posting that, i love it.

Jay Loveless

June 10, 2010 at 10:40 AM

Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3

Debbie Guzzi

June 9, 2010 at 1:33 PM

ok? Light & Love

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

June 8, 2010 at 11:43 PM

Dear Raul, Saw YOU were on line, Sorry I've not Commented This is a Perfect Eeflection of the Picture on YOUR Contest Page Excuse my ignorence I did not know who " Pablo " was so I went online to read His History and some of his POETRY I just wrote a new POEM " E " YOU should read it I respect YOUR POETIC Knowledge YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 7, 2010 at 2:02 PM

Quiet introspection Raul.. a wonderful contest .. and your Senryu ..simple yet elegant to describe the legend... with luv.. Linda-Marie..

June 7, 2010 at 11:17 AM

Wow! So much said in this poem. This is a wonderful reminder how poems can be simply stated yet have great impact. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 7, 2010 at 9:33 AM

I see the weekend brought a lot of inspiration to all PoetrySoup Poets. I enjoyed reading you poetry today Raul. Thank you for sponsoring the contest for all the wonderful poets here at the Soup. Love, Carol

Jared Pickett

June 7, 2010 at 6:46 AM

Okay bro, Tupac is my favorite rapper/poet and has been for most of my life.... His deep raps about life's struggles has been an inspiration a million times over.... You best believe that I INTEND TO WIN THIS CONTEST...... I will post soon..... Question: Do I have to write of Vincent Van Gogh through Tupacs eyes??? Or, can I dedicate my verse to Tupac himself seeing as that is my interest, what inspires me????? I very much enjoyed this Senryu, well written and thought provoking......:JP]

Brian Strand

June 6, 2010 at 11:42 PM

Thank you Raul for the honour bestowed upon my tribute poem to Pablo.Rgds Brian

C.C Bloomsfield

June 6, 2010 at 11:22 PM

Yep Raul,Neruda takes it all in,some of it he takes it out in verse,Neruda is an icon ,imagine if he let all his thoughts out in verse,What would that make him?Excellent thoughts out in verse,Raul. .I love the passion Neruda carried,and I love your senryu(s) as much as I Love your Haiku(s)...C