Neptune's Macbeth

Not even its oceans could cleanse Macbeth’s guilt,
Etched into palms and cut into lifelines, within skin everlasting.
Poisonous serpents twist like gaseous clouds acrid, in a helix of
Trust doubled, betrayed by a cousin valiant no more.
Unknown and unseen, unjust and unkempt - a fate handed down unanimous.
Nocturnal damnation circling circling, that coven three upon a heath
Erupting at the manipulation of a man come undone.
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Alex Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 11:10 PM
Great Acrostic on Neptune. Congratulations!
Caliri Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 8:42 PM
Congrats on a 5th place fiish in my Planets contest from 8 years ago, I mean 6 months ago. I loved how you entangled Macbeth into this theme. Excellent work!
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 6:06 PM
very descriptive acrostic Thomas, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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