Neil Not Young

I creak when I move
uphill or down; I can't win...
'cause rust never sleeps.


For "Rust" contest sponsored by Rick Parise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 28, 2011 at 6:31 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning George. I hope you will continue to write and share your poetry with us. Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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December 27, 2011 at 11:44 AM
good luck in the contest George. (I am forever young,....ha,ha,ha...smiling) hugs Anne-Lise
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