Neighbour’s Envy

two thousand grape clusters
ripened in my vineyard
all are green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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June 16, 2025 at 11:53 AM
You mean there are no sour grapes thriveni? :). Love the word play. Nice one. Cheers - Gary
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June 17, 2025 at 11:03 AM
Your thoughts DID translate to words thriveni. :) I think the beauty of poetry is that it allows for so many different interpretations. It was a lovely read and even more so now I know the true meaning behind it. :) Cheers - Gary
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June 16, 2025 at 6:51 PM
haha! grape likened to abundance and wisdom, I tried to get a point here that one can't conquer jealous people. phew! my thoughts didn't translate to words, kaput lol. Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet, your words are precious to me and brings me smile. thank you for your time.
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