Neglected Then Connected

neglect
a sweet puppy
without a home to live
warm bed given by a stranger
connect

Written By: Laura Loo
Date Written: February 18, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hagy Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Great write!... I wish I could save them all!
Mcdaid Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:23 AM
Rescued by a loving heart beautifully penned laura
Scars Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Thank you Liam :)-luloo *smiles*
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 9:30 PM
so sweet, Laura. You are a very good person. I do not like very much people who dislike animals. (my dang son-in-law!!)
Scars Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Thanks lovely lady :) I can't imagine my life with out my two dogs, white fluffy bunny and mini turtle! *smiles* -luloo
Turner Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 7:51 PM
You got me with the picture I do so love dogs. Then I read and smiled. Great write and great thinking. "Buddy" (my beagle) would be proud of you:) Peace
Scars Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Oh I already love Buddy! He is so sweet I bet! Beagles are so beautiful, aren't they?!? I LOVE all dogs. In the whole world. I only have two, but if I had a bigger house I'd be adopting more. I want to save every puppy in the world. So sweet and loving..Thanks-luloo *smiles*
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February 19, 2016 at 5:38 PM
From 'neglect' all the way to 'connect.' A super CINQUAIN luloo!! Best wishes, Keith
Scars Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Thank you Keith :)*smiles* -luloo
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:52 PM
aww how sweet LuLoo I hate to see animals abandoned for whatever reason:-( - I wish I could have a pet:-( hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Thank you Jan...-luloo
A. Sharma Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:24 AM
Lovely poem Laura... that tender emotion..
Scars Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma :)-luloo
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