Neglected

My heartbeat races wildly The moment your dark eyes meet my own You are so close Yet so far away My heart outstreches its weakened limbs Beckoning you to give it life once again Instead, you turn Without looking back and slowly walk away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 23, 2011 at 5:02 PM
You write from such deep place that has to come out... You are a Poet... Btw if your dream is to get published go for it I just had my first book come out this month and it is really a good feelng.. I put a blog up about it last week, may still be there if you wanted to see it.... thanks for your kind words on A poets paradise... it is how i live and write.. Michael
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November 22, 2011 at 12:11 PM
Smile, Whom Would Ever Wish to Walk Away From Such Beauty * My Luv, Always & Forever, John!!:) *
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