Neglect

Eyes lie in wait ,
No sign of you,
Neglect a silent killer !


















User name- Upma Sharma
Motif - philosophical
Written on 24/2/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Marszalowicz Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:28 PM
pretty good, colorful usage. In fact you should write more submissions like this.
Davis Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Dr. Upma So powerful and deep. Very honest and truthful write. Thank you for the nice comment on my Paradise poem
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February 25, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Congratulations on your fine win. Enjoyed your Haiku - Connie
Mehta Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 5:05 AM
Congrats on the fine win. enjoyed the fine metrical composition,
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February 25, 2014 at 4:10 AM
Dr Upma, , congratulations on your wonderful win - SKAT
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February 25, 2014 at 2:45 AM
- Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, Dr.Upma. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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